I have resolved issues 330, 331, 332, 334, 335 and 336 as
fixed in
NETSEL-05. I am assuming that 333 will be resolved in -06.
That still leaves Issues 374, 375, 376, 377, and 378 open.
Can the submitters of those issues look over the document
and post whether
their concerns have been resolved?
The document is available for inspection here:
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draf
t-ietf-eap-netsel-problem-05.txt
>Jari Arkko said:
>First, there are some open issues in the issue tracker.
I consider
>issues 330-336 now mostly closed, based on the revisions
in the new
>drafts. Thanks. For issue 333 there is one small
remaining thing,
>noted below.
>
>What is the situation with the other issues? They have
>been made for previous revisions, have they been
resolved
>in -05?
>
>I also re-read the document and noticed two small
editorial
>issues, also noted below.
>
>But otherwise I think the document is ready. Ship it!
>
>Parts remaining from issue 333:
>
> > Section 4 gives the conclusions
> > and some suggestions on how to proceed for the
rest.
>This should be: "Section 4 presents our
conclusions."
>
>Editorial:
>
> > discussion of the limitations of certain
classes of solution,
>
>s/solution/solutions/
>
>
> > The solution ...
>
>Multiple occurrences of this. I think the draft should
>not assume that we have a single solution in this
space.
>Therefore, we should typically write "Solutions
should
>satisfy ... " as opposed to "The solution
should satisfy ..."
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