On Fri, May 18, 2007 at 01:06:29PM -0700, Bernard Aboba
wrote:
> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draf
t-ietf-eap-netsel-problem-07.txt
> If you have submitted an issue, please check the -07
document and let us know if your issue has not been
addressed. The "last look" will last until June
3, 2007.
Thanks for the changes! -07 seems to address my comments.
Just a minor editorial comment:
2.1. Discovery of Points of Attachment
"The 802.11 Beacon is sent only at a rate within the
basic rate set,
which typically consists of the lowest supported rate, or
perhaps the
lowest supported rate."
- "consists of the lowest supported rate_s_"?
"perhaps _only_ the lowest"?
(without at least the first change this sentence looks
somewhat odd)
And a small technical (but not really asking for any
changes):
"of 37.9 percent. The calculation can be verified
as follows:"
- the calculations for 37.9% channel utilization are quite
detailed
for an IETF draft, but then again, at least the claimed
case is now
much clearer to verify
- "virtual APs" could likely do some optimizations
to avoid most of the
DIFS waits, so the percentage would likely be a bit
smaller, but
anyway, there's already enough details here and I do not
really want
to suggest adding more 
--
Jouni Malinen PGP
id EFC895FA
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