Issue: AAA-Key Section 1.2

    Submitter name: Vidya Narayanan
    Submitter email address: vidyanqualcomm.com
    Date first submitted: 5/01/2006
    Reference: 
    Document: Keying Framework
    Comment type: 'E'ditorial
    Priority: '2' May fix 
    Section: 1.2
    Rationale/Explanation of issue: 
Given that the term AAA-Key is not used elsewhere in the
document, it
would be good to add a sentence clarifying that the
definition is
provided as a clarification to the terminology used in older
documents
and that it is no longer used.  
    
    Requested change:

Add to AAA-Key definition: 

"This term is no longer used to refer to the MSK in
this document."
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Narayanan, Vidya wrote:

>    Submitter name: Vidya Narayanan
>    Submitter email address: vidyanqualcomm.com
>    Date first submitted: 5/01/2006
>    Reference: 
>    Document: Keying Framework
>    Comment type: 'E'ditorial
>    Priority: '2' May fix 
>    Section: 1.2
>    Rationale/Explanation of issue: 
>Given that the term AAA-Key is not used elsewhere in the
document, it
>would be good to add a sentence clarifying that the
definition is
>provided as a clarification to the terminology used in
older documents
>and that it is no longer used.  
>  
>
Fine, but...

>Add to AAA-Key definition: 
>
>"This term is no longer used to refer to the MSK
in this document.
>  
>
This text could be understood so that the term refers to
something
else instead. I would suggest "This term is no longer
used in this
document."

--Jari


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