Dave (and the whole NTP WG),
You asked the question, what is next...
Harlan has graciously taken your revision of the -04 draft
and generated the specified internet-draft format. (Thanks
to
Jim/Jack/Bill for the original document, you (Dave Mills)
for the markup, and Harlan for the reformatting). We are
making progress...
This will be submitted to the internet-drafts repository as
the -05 draft as soon as the internet-drafts window opens
up again.
We will then begin another period of soliciting for
comments,
this time on the -05 draft.
In order to gain traction on the document, Brian and I have
decided to solicit these comments in a more formal manner,
much
like the RFC Editor does.
Comments will need to be submitted to the official NTP WG
mailing list (this list).
Comments should be in the following format.
1)*** SECTION #'s*** [i.e. Section 5, 2nd
paragraph]
2) the text you want changed,
3) the new correct text and
4) if the changes are spacing or indentation
than please
note
that.
Please comment on changes to the -05 document (when
available).
Please do not send a new document with any changes already
incorporated.
Comments will be discussed on the list, and the editor that
draws
the short straw will get the onerous task of incorporating
the
agreed upon changes.
Folks that would like to get a head start can view the draft
at:
www.eecis.udel.edu/~mills/ntp4.txt. This is a temporary site
until
the draft moves to the official internet-drafts repository.
We really need folks to read the draft and provide
comments.
All the editors and Dr. Mills have observed the general lack
of
feedback. This makes their job harder. Please review and
speak up.
Also, don't forget there is a newly posted NTP MIB for
review as
well.
Thanks again for all the recent effort put into getting this
document
revised.
Regards,
Karen
> -----Original Message-----
> From:
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> [mailto:ntpwg-bounces+karen.odonoghue=navy.millists.ntp.isc.o
rg] On Behalf Of David L. Mills
> Sent: Friday, March 09, 2007 22:22
> To: ntpwgntp.isc.org
> Subject: [ntpwg] Harlan as Hero
>
> Guys,
>
> Harlan managed to bash the XML document to RFC. I made
a few
> very minor changes in the XML (organization and broken
> reference). It still needs a list of figures, but
everything
> else looks clean and shiny.
>
> XML www.eecis.udel.edu/~mills/ntp4.xml
> RFC www.eecis.udel.edu/~mills/ntp4.txt
>
> The documents are queued for overnight transmission to
the
> web. The links on the NTP project page are correct as
well.
>
> What's next?
>
> Dave
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 is
completely valid.
* There are 2 instances of lines with
non-RFC3330-compliant IPv4
addresses in the document. If these are example
addresses, they
should be changed.
Again, not an issue since the addresses are assigned to
NTP.
David L. Mills wrote:
> Guys,
>
> Harlan managed to bash the XML document to RFC. I made
a few very minor
> changes in the XML (organization and broken reference).
It still needs a
> list of figures, but everything else looks clean and
shiny.
>
> XML www.eecis.udel.edu/~mills/ntp4.xml
> RFC www.eecis.udel.edu/~mills/ntp4.txt
>
> The documents are queued for overnight transmission to
the web. The
> links on the NTP project page are correct as well.
>
> What's next?
>
> Dave
> _______________________________________________
> ntpwg mailing list
> ntpwg<img src=){kind=link}
 is
> completely valid.
>
> * There are 2 instances of lines with
non-RFC3330-compliant IPv4
> addresses in the document. If these are example
addresses, they
> should be changed.
>
> Again, not an issue since the addresses are assigned to
NTP.
>
>
> David L. Mills wrote:
>
>> Guys,
>>
>> Harlan managed to bash the XML document to RFC. I
made a few very minor
>> changes in the XML (organization and broken
reference). It still needs a
>> list of figures, but everything else looks clean
and shiny.
>>
>> XML www.eecis.udel.edu/~mills/ntp4.xml
>> RFC www.eecis.udel.edu/~mills/ntp4.txt
>>
>> The documents are queued for overnight transmission
to the web. The
>> links on the NTP project page are correct as well.
>>
>> What's next?
>>
>> Dave
>> _______________________________________________
>> ntpwg mailing list
>> ntpwg<img src=){kind=link}