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WG LAST CALL: draft-ietf-ntp-ntpv4-proto-06.txt
country flaguser name
United States		 2007-06-12 15:00:39 

  


  

    





Hi Karen,



 



I recommend that this document is ready to
be forwarded to publication.



 



This revision was a pleasure to read and I
could find only one error (E) and one question (T):




 



    
 
  1. Section
     4, paragraph 5, line 2
    2. 





Change: … relative to
the each server clock



To:
        … relative to each server
clock




    
 
  1. Section
     5, paragraph 5
    2. 





Comment: It is not
intuitive why the poll interval should be the same as the loop time constant.

Shouldn217;t




         ;         
      Loop time constant >> poll interval



         ;      
for the filtering to work properly?



 



Regards,



Steve Chen




Rivulet Communications, Inc.

















From:
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[mailto:ntpwg-bounces+schen=rivulet.comlists.ntp.isc.org] On Behalf Of Odonoghue, Karen F CIV NSWCDD,
W13

Sent: Friday, June 08, 2007 12:02
PM

To: ntpwglists.ntp.isc.org

Subject: [ntpwg] WG LAST CALL:
draft-ietf-ntp-ntpv4-proto-06.txt






 









This message initiates a NTP working group last call on the document: 













    
Title: Network Time Protocol Version 4 Protocol And 

       

Algorithms Specification 

     Filename:

<draft-ietf-ntp-ntpv4-proto-06.txt> 



The
purpose of this WG last call is to ensure that this 

document is ready to be forwarded

to the IESG for approval 

and publication as a Proposed
Standard. 



As part
of this last call process, we are asking that working 

group members do the following: 



1. Review
the document for both technical and editorial 

errors.&nbsp; Technical issues
should be sent to the NTPWG mailing 

list (ntpwg at lists.ntp.org) for
discussion and resolution. 

Editorial comments may be sent
either to the mailing list or 

directly to the document editor
(Jim Martin, jim at daedelus.com). 



2. 
Post to the mailing list your position on whether or not 

this document is ready to be
forwarded for publication. 



The last
call period will last two weeks, ending on Friday,&nbsp; 22 June, 2007. 



Upon
completion of the last call, the WG chair(s) will take 

action based upon the consensus of
the WG. 



Regards,


Karen O'Donoghue and Brian Haberman











  

  
  
   
     
    

  

    Re:  WG LAST CALL:
draft-ietf-ntp-ntpv4-proto-06.txt
  


  

     country flaguser name
United States		
     2007-06-13 09:51:11
  


  

    
Steve,

The poll interval must be scaled according to the time
constant in order 
to satisfy the mathematical constraints of the feedback
loop. The loop 
parameters have been carefully chosen so that the scaling is
directly 
proportional. To be convincing for the skeptical engineer,
see the book 
and/or the briefing slides on the project page.

Dave

Steve Chen wrote:

> Hi Karen,
>
>
>
> I recommend that this document is ready to be forwarded
to publication.
>
>
>
> This revision was a pleasure to read and I could find
only one error 
> (E) and
> one question (T):
>
>
>
> 1. Section 4, paragraph 5, line 2
>
> Change: . relative to the each server clock
>
> To: . relative to each server clock
>
> 2. Section 5, paragraph 5
>
> Comment: It is not intuitive why the poll interval
should be the same 
> as the
> loop time constant. Shouldn't
>
> Loop time constant >> poll interval
>
> for the filtering to work properly?
>
>
>
> Regards,
>
> Steve Chen
>
> Rivulet Communications, Inc.
>
> _____
>
> From: ntpwg-bounces+schen=rivulet.comlists.ntp.isc.org
> [mailto:ntpwg-bounces+schen=rivulet.comlists.ntp.isc.org] On Behalf Of
> Odonoghue, Karen F CIV NSWCDD, W13
> Sent: Friday, June 08, 2007 12:02 PM
> To: ntpwglists.ntp.isc.org
> Subject: [ntpwg] WG LAST CALL:
draft-ietf-ntp-ntpv4-proto-06.txt
>
>
>
> This message initiates a NTP working group last call on
the document:
>
> Title: Network Time Protocol Version 4 Protocol And
> Algorithms Specification
> Filename: <draft-ietf-ntp-ntpv4-proto-06.txt>
>
> The purpose of this WG last call is to ensure that
this
> document is ready to be forwarded to the IESG for
approval
> and publication as a Proposed Standard.
>
> As part of this last call process, we are asking that
working
> group members do the following:
>
> 1. Review the document for both technical and
editorial
> errors. Technical issues should be sent to the NTPWG
mailing
> list (ntpwg at lists.ntp.org) for discussion and
resolution.
> Editorial comments may be sent either to the mailing
list or
> directly to the document editor (Jim Martin, jim at
daedelus.com).
>
> 2. Post to the mailing list your position on whether or
not
> this document is ready to be forwarded for
publication.
>
> The last call period will last two weeks, ending on
Friday, 22 June, 
> 2007.
>
> Upon completion of the last call, the WG chair(s) will
take
> action based upon the consensus of the WG.
>
> Regards,
> Karen O'Donoghue and Brian Haberman
>
>
>
>
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