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I was talking about NTP version.
I commented version 6 of the draft.
Sorry for the misleading sentence.
.lm
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-----Original Message-----
From: Danny Mayer [ mayer ntp.isc.org">mailto:mayer ntp.isc.org]
Sent: Tuesday, June 26, 2007 04:51 AM GMT Standard Time
To: Laurent Montini (lmontini)
Cc: ntpwg lists.ntp.isc.org
Subject: Re: [ntpwg] wg last call reminder
Laurent Montini (lmontini) wrote:
> Hi,
>
> Removing from my short list the comments Yakov and Danny already made,
> I remain (if I understood correctly as a neophyte wrt NTPv4 draft)
> with:
>
> 1) page 29
> Considering text and Figure 17, I believe there are the following
> errors:
>
> A packet is a duplicate if the transmit timestamp T3 in the packet
> matches the xmt state variable.
>
> ==> is that not the org state variable?
>
> A packet is bogus if the origin
> timestamp T1 in the packet does not match the org state variable.
>
> ==> is that not the xmt state variable?
>
> Also in the Figure 17, for the consistency,
> T1=t1? (Peer A xmt state variable at t4)
> Changed to
> T1<>t1?
>
> 2) page 34
> Considering Figure 22 and Figure 1 on page 6 I'd have liked to
> get a definition of packet mode.
> A.5.1 does not tell much and does not use "packet mode" term.
> In that context I did not really understand the relation between
> Figure 1 and Figure 22.
>
> Otherwise version 4 draft is an improvement (from version 3) and ready
> to go to IESG.
>
> .lm
Except that we were commenting on v6 of the draft and not v4. Does the
v6 version not answer/fix the issues you raise?
Danny
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