Could you review my draft please?

Dear sip experts,

I've written a draft and this draft describe a new method
for the Presence
Server to process presence in inter-domain scenarios .
The new method void duplicated messaging between Presence
Servers.
I am interested in SIMPLE and will work on it. This is my
first draft and I
hope someone can review my draft and give me some comments.
Thanks!

you can fetch a copy from:
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
draft-zhou-simple-hierarchical-presence-
00.txt

Regards,
Hong



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